Star Wars Episode II - A Forbidden Love
Tag Line: After an assassination attempt on Bail Organa who is the front runner for the next Chancellor, the Jedi return to protect the Republic from the Clone Federation who has returned stronger for their war against the Republic. Locations / Planets: Kamino - The dark water planet, this is where the Clone Federation has been hiding for years building it's army. Corcusant - The home of the Republic, Anakin falls in love with Rose Dantooine - A planet which was beautiful, no a wasteland planet due to a massive civil war that destroyed everything many years ago, the only civilization is the group of survivalists, full of hate due to being a generation from the civil war. |
Cast of Characters:
Anakin Skywalker - 21 yr old, young Jedi Knight, best friend of Obi Wan. His life changes as Queen Rose Winterfield enters his life once again and he must face the challenges of his desire and his duties. He has been chosen to protect Palpatine.
Rose Winters - Returns to Corcusant to support Bail Organa become the next Chancellor. She begins a relationship with the young Anakin Skywalker despite the obstacles.
Obi Wan Kenobi - Sent to Dantooine to rescue the Chancellor before the Clone Federation gets to him first.
Baz Newton - The Leader of the Jedi after the deaths of Mikhail & Vaseem, the lone wolf Jedi is now a team leader as he is the second strongest Jedi in the galaxy. He takes issues with Anakin Skywalker due to his actions.
Bail Organa - The strongest candidate to become elected Chancellor. His stance against Clone Federation lead to an assassination attempt on his life.
President Palpatine - The last place candidate. He senses mistrust between Anakin and the Jedi, and begins to bond with Anakin.
Kwan Winters - Very protective of his sister, Rose. He is against her seeing Anakin.
Chancellor Augustine - The Chancellor who is stranded on Dantooine, who for the first time in his life has to fight for survival and his life from the savages of Dantooine as well as the Clone Federation.
Darth Pryor - Protecting Razaak from any Republic or Jedi threat. He is the one that is hunting Chancellor Augustine to bring to Razaak.
Razaak - Returns with a plan to secure a system, he will need to capture Chancellor Augustine to go head to head with the Republic for them to give in to his demands.
Episode II - A Forbidden Love
We open to Rose Winters arriving to Corcusant where there is a giant crowd awaiting for her to speak. She begins to talk as we learn about the upcoming election for the Chancellorship. Bail Organa is the front runner due to him working endlessly to rebuild Alderaan after the Clone Federation invasion. His stance against the Clone Federation and his leadership skills won the hearts of many within the Republic. He is expected to win by a large margin. After the Queen speaks to endorse her Prime Minister, Bail Organa approaches the podium to talk. Five Clone Assassins are spread throughout the crowd. They attempt to assassinate Bail Organa, but their plan is disrupted by Obi Wan and Anakin. Anakin stumbles in his heroic actions, but Obi Wan is able to take control and stop the would be assassins. Three of the Clone Assassins get away. The Clone Federation has been gone for a long time and this marks their return. The Republic is now in great fear.
Once the action slows down, we get to meet the characters Anakin & Obi Wan. Anakin is now a full Jedi Knight and his friendship with Obi Wan has grown since the last story. There is whitty banter between them, Obi Wan is light hearted, makes fun of Anakin from time to time. Anakin stumbled with the heroic rescue showing that he is not all powerful yet. That he is still learning. We also learn of his infatuation toward Rose. After the rescue, he attempts to talk to her, but her entourage pulled her out of the situation so he could not get a chance to show what he has become. Her return to Corcusant gets his attention.
Jedi Council is held, we meet the Jedi on Corcusant. Baz Newton is the leader and makes all the decisions. They discuss the threat of the Clone Federation and how now there are three loose Clone Assassins hidden among the planet. Baz Newton assigns the Jedi to protect each candidate who is running for Chancellor. Six candidates need Jedi protectors, Anakin desperately hoping that his powers have been noticed by Baz and other members of the Council to assign him to protect Bail Organa so he can get close to Rose, but to his surprise, Baz assigns him with the last candidate that has the least chance of winning the election, President Palpatine of Mustaphar. Anakin is extremely upset and expresses his feelings to Obi Wan. He always felt Baz Newton has had it out for him since the beginning. Baz thinks Anakin is too young, too rogue, not enough of a team player. Anakin felt that he is more powerful than the other Jedi who are assigned to the other candidates.
Meanwhile, we are introduced to the current Chancellor of the Republic, who was briefly mentioned in the last story - Chancellor Augustine. Obi Wan, being a top Jedi, one of the few left who has been trained by Yoda personally, has been assigned to fly toward Chancellor's ship location since the Clone Federation threat has reappeared. Obi Wan and Anakin must say their good byes. As Obi Wan approaches Augustine's ship, the Clone Federation has returned in full force, attacking the ship with an objective to capture Chancellor Augustine. The ship goes down to the nearest planet, which is Dantooine. Dantooine is a wasteland planet, lots of purple and night. Obi Wan must search the planet to save Augustine before the Clones get to him.
Anakin meets Palpatine and doesn't like him. He sees nothing of interest or anything in common. Palpatine is just some boring politician in Anakin's eyes. He is the least likely to win the election and Anakin believes he is wasting his time. So late at night, Anakin is still determined to show Rose what he has become. He sneaks off toward the Alderaan Headquarters. He has to be careful not to be seen by the Jedi protecting Bail Organa, so in true Romeo + Juliet fashion, he sneaks up her window. When she answers, she is angry at Anakin for leaving her and never contacting her after all these years. Anakin confesses that he was ashamed to see her and that he wanted to become something great before he could see her again. She says the only thing that was important was the size of his heart, not the stature of his position in the galaxy.
Dantooine, Obi Wan encounters many obstacles before he can locate Augustine. He runs into the 'monster' of Dantooine which resembles a sabretooth tiger. He then has to battle survivalists on Dantooine who have Chancellor Augustine prisoner. After locating Augustine, more danger arrives, as Razaak's ship and tons of Clone Federation ships have landed. Obi Wan then has a chase scene to get rid of the Clone Soldiers.
Anakin takes out Rose for the first time. Her character is struggling because Kwan, her brother, does not approve of her seeing Anakin. There is a rift between the two siblings. Both character have to sneak out to see each other. Anakin doesn't know how to date on Corcusant, and Palpatine then reveals he knows Anakin is sneaking out, but actually encourages it. A bond is formed between them as Palpatine notices Anakin's Jedi rule breaking and his power, which could lead to an alliance between the two. It is Palpatine who gives Anakin opera tickets on a giant beautiful arena where Anakin & Rose share their first date and first kiss.
The danger increases on Dantooine as Darth Pryor returns. He is on a solo mission to seek out Chancellor Augustine. The two run into each other as Darth Pryor confronts Obi Wan again and recongnizes him from their last confrontation in the Palace of Alderaan. Obi Wan gets Augustine to in an escape ship, but sacrafices himself to face Pryor and the Federation. Pryor and Obi Wan battle and Pryor once again gets the best of him, knocking him down, but Razaak saves his life, convincing Pryor that they need to use Obi Wan as a hostage for his scheme. Pryor reluctantly agrees.
Anakin is caught by the Jedi protecting Bail Organa. He sees Anakin with Rose. He tells Baz which leads to a very stern confrontation. Baz Newton lays into Anakin as it is not a part of a Jedi to leave his mission of protecting Palpatine. The backstory of Alderaan tradition is revealed that Royalty can only marry other Royalty among Alderaan. We learn that Rose is suppose to meet with the DUKE Chawford. This upsets Anakin. The Jedi are allowed to love and be in relationships, but it is frowned upon. Especially when it conflicts their mission of keeping peace and justice to the Republic. Anakin is on thin ice. Palpatine has more dialogue with Anakin convincing him to follow his heart and not his warrior ways. Anakin decides that he can't be kicked out of the Jedi for breaking rules, that it would break Obi Wan's heart and all his effort and support would be for nothing. Anakin has to say good bye to Rose. Anakin doesn't want to put Rose in a bad position of breaking the rules and have her people disown her for not carrying out Alderaan tradition. Anakin knows he's an outsider. Rose wants to follow her heart, but Anakin backs away. She is upset.
A huge ball occurs in honor of the new election. All the politicians (and their Jedi bodyguards) will be there. Palpatine is not the type that goes to social events, he is a private type guy, all business. He despises those events, but notices Rose will be there. And to further the separation of Jedi & Anakin, he says he will attend, which will force Anakin to go. At the ball, Baz Newton socializing with the Jedi. It is a massive event. Anakin is with the Mustaphar entourage at a table. The Duke has entered the ball and finds his way toward Alderaan table. Palpatine is commentating while this is happeneing, angering Anakin who has locked his eyes on the situation. Duke is flirting with Rose. Rose notices Anakin, and purposely ignores him. Anakin's frustation is too much, as he walks straight up to the Alderaan table and asks Rose for a dance. She is hestitant, but agrees. Anakin and Rose dance to slow romantic music, while Baz Newton is watching Anakin's every move with anger on his face, while Palpatine is smiling, talking to his people about how great Anakin and Rose look together. Anakin kisses her again.
Jedi call Anakin to the council. Baz yells at Anakin. He threatens to kick him out of the Jedi Order if he sees her again. He talks of the fact that they can't get in touch with Obi Wan, Anakin replies that Obi Wan is strong with the Force. Anakin is dismissed. Anakin and Palpatine talk in the Mustaphar quarters. More manipulation, Anakin identifies with Palpatine. Palaptine is also a somewhat of an outcast in the political arena. Palpatine feels he is the most powerful, but no one 'gets him'. The same way Anakin feels. A friendship occurs between the two.
Obi Wan is lead to Kamino, the planet where Clone Federation has been hiding out. Obi Wan witnesses the MASSIVE structures that are above the water planet. Raining, lightning. Gives an eerie vibe to the base. The Clone Federation has used the Alderaan energy to build up an Army. And now they plan on invading. Obi Wan is injured due to Pryor. He is held hostage, where Razaak is planning on heading toward Corcusant to meet with the Senate.
Anakin has to see Rose again. He loves her at this point. This is the sequence where they 'escape' from their own worlds. Kwan and his entourage chase Rose, but lose her in the streets. Anakin and Rose enter a Nature Dome located in Corcusant. There are trees, waterfalls, flowers. The two share an intimate moment. Alderaan entourage enter and another chase occurs, where they jump in the waterfall to avoid being scene. They share a romantic kiss in the water.
Anakin arrives back and kisses Rose goodbye, however something is very wrong. The Clone Assassins have returned and they are still after Bail. They make their way into Alderaan quarters. Anakin senses this and is in the area, and heads in to save the day. The Clone Assassins end up killing the Bail Organa Jedi Protector and Anakin barges in to cut down the two assassins, as the third and final one jumps in the speeder outside the window. A struggle occurs above the city, but Anakin fails, and ends up falling to barely saving his life, while the last Clone Assassin escapes.
The Jedi arrive in Alderaan Headquarters and Baz takes Anakin to the rooftop with the other Jedi. He banishes Anakin from the Jedi Order. Huge argument takes place, but Anakin is no longer a Jedi. Anakin leaves furious. Big news breaks as Chancellor Augustine has arrived back to Corcusant. He holds a meeting to announce the threat of Clone Federation and says the old ways of the Republic should be extinct and they must come up with a defense system of the Republic hinting at a Republic Army. After this big Senate scene, Anakin is alone and Palpatine finds him. Anakin apologizes that he can't look after him anymore, and Palpatine makes a joke that he hates the new Jedi that is assigned to him. However, the conversation is interupted as Razaak enters Corcusant. However, there is no attack on him due to his announcement that they have a Jedi hostage, Obi Wan hologram is shown. Anakin is shocked. Razaak enters the Senate and faces Chancellor Augustine. His demands - he should be reinstated in the Republic and demands a system to be turned over to him. If his demands are not met, the Jedi dies and there will be an invasion of his Clone Soldiers into Corcusant to take over the Republic. He leaves. The Republic goes into frantic mode. Chaos.
Anakin meditiates. He uses his fear and anger to sense where Obi Wan is at. He goes to Rose's apartment to tell her that he has to leave and he knows where Obi Wan is at. He came to say goodbye. She cries, they kiss. Anakin returns to Mustaphar headquarters to borrow a ship. Palpatine considers him a friend and lends him a ship. Rose returns and begs Anakin not to go that he can not head into the Clone homebase by himself and survive. Anakin tells her that its his friendship with Obi Wan that is his decision in going and he has no choice. He says he loves her. Kwan, Rose and Palpatine watch Anakin head off toward the Kamino. Palpatine tracks the ship.
Anakin lands and sneaks through the base. Lots of action sequences. On Corcusant, Augustine and the top Republic Officials are in panic mode. Palpatine enters and tells Augustine that its time to sign the act of war and enable a Republic Army. Palpatine offers his Mustaphar Army. Palpatine says he knows where the Clones are located.
Anakin meets with Obi Wan. Obi Wan is freed by him, but injured. Anakin has brought a lightsaber for him. Anakin says he needs to get him out, he hears the footsteps approach. It is Pryor. Pryor ignites his red lightsaber. Obi Wan tells Anakin to get out. Anakin tells Obi Wan that he can take him. He is more powerful. Obi Wan at this point realizes he needs to let go of Anakin. Anakin isn't teen anymore, he's an adult. A full Jedi Knight. The two battle Pryor with lightsabers, the room is super dark, near black, but the dark blue rain clouds are seen through a giant window. Anakin yells at Obi Wan to get to his ship, that Anakin will take Pryor. Obi Wan finally lets go, and listens to his student. He leaves - and its Anakin versus Pryor. The two clash. Pryor then begins to feel his emotions. He sees through Anakin. Anakin's confusion. His struggles. He senses he is in love. With a woman. The window is blown and the two fall down the roof in the rain outside. The two manage to jump through an opening which leads to a power generator type of room. Pryor ups the stakes. He then gives Anakin a choice. To leave now or else he will kill Anakin, and then locate his love and kill her too. Now the stakes are higher than ever, if Anakin loses, he will lose Rose. This only brings out so much anger and emotion out of Anakin, that suddenly he battles like he's never battled anyone before, with pure hatred, pure fear, pure anger. In an homage to the film 'Last of the Mohicans', Anakin decapitiates Pryor. He senses Obi Wan's ship. He gets aboard, but doesn't escape. He flies an opposite direcetion, which confuses Obi Wan. Anakin says he is going to end this Clone War. The Clone Ships launch off to prepare to surround Corcusant, but Mustaphar Ships have arrived, with an all out space climatic battle. The Jedi are on board one of the commanding ships. Baz and his Jedi look on.
Obi Wan and Anakin get to Razaak. Anakin holds his lightsaber up to Razaak's throat. Razaak laughs and says that there is a Sith Lord that will kill him. Anakin ignites Pryor's red lightsaber showing him that he already defeated the Sith Lord. The Republic Army defeats most of the Clone Ships. Razaak is defeated and captured.
Celebration in Corcusant. Lots of people , reporters surround Anakin as he is the hero of the Clone War. One reporter asks who he endorses for the new Chancellor, Anakin responds 'Palpatine'. A final scene between Baz Newton and Anakin. Baz says he can be a Jedi again, Anakin responds he never stopped being a Jedi. Anakin leaves. Palpatine is in his quarters. As he seems to be a real candidate in this election, the final Clone Assassin approaches with caution. He enters the room of Palpatine who is alone. Palpatine staring out the window closes his eyes. He says 'you have failed me'. This is the reveal that Palpatine was indeed the one that was behind the assassination of Bail Organa. He then uses the dark side to force choke and murder the last Clone Assassin.
Final Scene - Alderaan. A Giant Wedding. Anakin & Rose. Obi Wan looks on with Baz. Dialogue between the two. Baz says even though he is highly against this, Anakin is the hero of the Clone War. Obi Wan smiles and chuckles. Obi Wan takes his place as the best man. Chancellor Augustine arrives. Bail Organa and his crew arrange seats nearby, but instead, Augustine walks past Bail Organa and finds a seat near front next to Palpatine and the Mustaphar group - signifying that Palpatine will most likely now win the election and become the new Chancellor. Anakin and Rose wed and the two kiss.
THE END
We open to Rose Winters arriving to Corcusant where there is a giant crowd awaiting for her to speak. She begins to talk as we learn about the upcoming election for the Chancellorship. Bail Organa is the front runner due to him working endlessly to rebuild Alderaan after the Clone Federation invasion. His stance against the Clone Federation and his leadership skills won the hearts of many within the Republic. He is expected to win by a large margin. After the Queen speaks to endorse her Prime Minister, Bail Organa approaches the podium to talk. Five Clone Assassins are spread throughout the crowd. They attempt to assassinate Bail Organa, but their plan is disrupted by Obi Wan and Anakin. Anakin stumbles in his heroic actions, but Obi Wan is able to take control and stop the would be assassins. Three of the Clone Assassins get away. The Clone Federation has been gone for a long time and this marks their return. The Republic is now in great fear.
Once the action slows down, we get to meet the characters Anakin & Obi Wan. Anakin is now a full Jedi Knight and his friendship with Obi Wan has grown since the last story. There is whitty banter between them, Obi Wan is light hearted, makes fun of Anakin from time to time. Anakin stumbled with the heroic rescue showing that he is not all powerful yet. That he is still learning. We also learn of his infatuation toward Rose. After the rescue, he attempts to talk to her, but her entourage pulled her out of the situation so he could not get a chance to show what he has become. Her return to Corcusant gets his attention.
Jedi Council is held, we meet the Jedi on Corcusant. Baz Newton is the leader and makes all the decisions. They discuss the threat of the Clone Federation and how now there are three loose Clone Assassins hidden among the planet. Baz Newton assigns the Jedi to protect each candidate who is running for Chancellor. Six candidates need Jedi protectors, Anakin desperately hoping that his powers have been noticed by Baz and other members of the Council to assign him to protect Bail Organa so he can get close to Rose, but to his surprise, Baz assigns him with the last candidate that has the least chance of winning the election, President Palpatine of Mustaphar. Anakin is extremely upset and expresses his feelings to Obi Wan. He always felt Baz Newton has had it out for him since the beginning. Baz thinks Anakin is too young, too rogue, not enough of a team player. Anakin felt that he is more powerful than the other Jedi who are assigned to the other candidates.
Meanwhile, we are introduced to the current Chancellor of the Republic, who was briefly mentioned in the last story - Chancellor Augustine. Obi Wan, being a top Jedi, one of the few left who has been trained by Yoda personally, has been assigned to fly toward Chancellor's ship location since the Clone Federation threat has reappeared. Obi Wan and Anakin must say their good byes. As Obi Wan approaches Augustine's ship, the Clone Federation has returned in full force, attacking the ship with an objective to capture Chancellor Augustine. The ship goes down to the nearest planet, which is Dantooine. Dantooine is a wasteland planet, lots of purple and night. Obi Wan must search the planet to save Augustine before the Clones get to him.
Anakin meets Palpatine and doesn't like him. He sees nothing of interest or anything in common. Palpatine is just some boring politician in Anakin's eyes. He is the least likely to win the election and Anakin believes he is wasting his time. So late at night, Anakin is still determined to show Rose what he has become. He sneaks off toward the Alderaan Headquarters. He has to be careful not to be seen by the Jedi protecting Bail Organa, so in true Romeo + Juliet fashion, he sneaks up her window. When she answers, she is angry at Anakin for leaving her and never contacting her after all these years. Anakin confesses that he was ashamed to see her and that he wanted to become something great before he could see her again. She says the only thing that was important was the size of his heart, not the stature of his position in the galaxy.
Dantooine, Obi Wan encounters many obstacles before he can locate Augustine. He runs into the 'monster' of Dantooine which resembles a sabretooth tiger. He then has to battle survivalists on Dantooine who have Chancellor Augustine prisoner. After locating Augustine, more danger arrives, as Razaak's ship and tons of Clone Federation ships have landed. Obi Wan then has a chase scene to get rid of the Clone Soldiers.
Anakin takes out Rose for the first time. Her character is struggling because Kwan, her brother, does not approve of her seeing Anakin. There is a rift between the two siblings. Both character have to sneak out to see each other. Anakin doesn't know how to date on Corcusant, and Palpatine then reveals he knows Anakin is sneaking out, but actually encourages it. A bond is formed between them as Palpatine notices Anakin's Jedi rule breaking and his power, which could lead to an alliance between the two. It is Palpatine who gives Anakin opera tickets on a giant beautiful arena where Anakin & Rose share their first date and first kiss.
The danger increases on Dantooine as Darth Pryor returns. He is on a solo mission to seek out Chancellor Augustine. The two run into each other as Darth Pryor confronts Obi Wan again and recongnizes him from their last confrontation in the Palace of Alderaan. Obi Wan gets Augustine to in an escape ship, but sacrafices himself to face Pryor and the Federation. Pryor and Obi Wan battle and Pryor once again gets the best of him, knocking him down, but Razaak saves his life, convincing Pryor that they need to use Obi Wan as a hostage for his scheme. Pryor reluctantly agrees.
Anakin is caught by the Jedi protecting Bail Organa. He sees Anakin with Rose. He tells Baz which leads to a very stern confrontation. Baz Newton lays into Anakin as it is not a part of a Jedi to leave his mission of protecting Palpatine. The backstory of Alderaan tradition is revealed that Royalty can only marry other Royalty among Alderaan. We learn that Rose is suppose to meet with the DUKE Chawford. This upsets Anakin. The Jedi are allowed to love and be in relationships, but it is frowned upon. Especially when it conflicts their mission of keeping peace and justice to the Republic. Anakin is on thin ice. Palpatine has more dialogue with Anakin convincing him to follow his heart and not his warrior ways. Anakin decides that he can't be kicked out of the Jedi for breaking rules, that it would break Obi Wan's heart and all his effort and support would be for nothing. Anakin has to say good bye to Rose. Anakin doesn't want to put Rose in a bad position of breaking the rules and have her people disown her for not carrying out Alderaan tradition. Anakin knows he's an outsider. Rose wants to follow her heart, but Anakin backs away. She is upset.
A huge ball occurs in honor of the new election. All the politicians (and their Jedi bodyguards) will be there. Palpatine is not the type that goes to social events, he is a private type guy, all business. He despises those events, but notices Rose will be there. And to further the separation of Jedi & Anakin, he says he will attend, which will force Anakin to go. At the ball, Baz Newton socializing with the Jedi. It is a massive event. Anakin is with the Mustaphar entourage at a table. The Duke has entered the ball and finds his way toward Alderaan table. Palpatine is commentating while this is happeneing, angering Anakin who has locked his eyes on the situation. Duke is flirting with Rose. Rose notices Anakin, and purposely ignores him. Anakin's frustation is too much, as he walks straight up to the Alderaan table and asks Rose for a dance. She is hestitant, but agrees. Anakin and Rose dance to slow romantic music, while Baz Newton is watching Anakin's every move with anger on his face, while Palpatine is smiling, talking to his people about how great Anakin and Rose look together. Anakin kisses her again.
Jedi call Anakin to the council. Baz yells at Anakin. He threatens to kick him out of the Jedi Order if he sees her again. He talks of the fact that they can't get in touch with Obi Wan, Anakin replies that Obi Wan is strong with the Force. Anakin is dismissed. Anakin and Palpatine talk in the Mustaphar quarters. More manipulation, Anakin identifies with Palpatine. Palaptine is also a somewhat of an outcast in the political arena. Palpatine feels he is the most powerful, but no one 'gets him'. The same way Anakin feels. A friendship occurs between the two.
Obi Wan is lead to Kamino, the planet where Clone Federation has been hiding out. Obi Wan witnesses the MASSIVE structures that are above the water planet. Raining, lightning. Gives an eerie vibe to the base. The Clone Federation has used the Alderaan energy to build up an Army. And now they plan on invading. Obi Wan is injured due to Pryor. He is held hostage, where Razaak is planning on heading toward Corcusant to meet with the Senate.
Anakin has to see Rose again. He loves her at this point. This is the sequence where they 'escape' from their own worlds. Kwan and his entourage chase Rose, but lose her in the streets. Anakin and Rose enter a Nature Dome located in Corcusant. There are trees, waterfalls, flowers. The two share an intimate moment. Alderaan entourage enter and another chase occurs, where they jump in the waterfall to avoid being scene. They share a romantic kiss in the water.
Anakin arrives back and kisses Rose goodbye, however something is very wrong. The Clone Assassins have returned and they are still after Bail. They make their way into Alderaan quarters. Anakin senses this and is in the area, and heads in to save the day. The Clone Assassins end up killing the Bail Organa Jedi Protector and Anakin barges in to cut down the two assassins, as the third and final one jumps in the speeder outside the window. A struggle occurs above the city, but Anakin fails, and ends up falling to barely saving his life, while the last Clone Assassin escapes.
The Jedi arrive in Alderaan Headquarters and Baz takes Anakin to the rooftop with the other Jedi. He banishes Anakin from the Jedi Order. Huge argument takes place, but Anakin is no longer a Jedi. Anakin leaves furious. Big news breaks as Chancellor Augustine has arrived back to Corcusant. He holds a meeting to announce the threat of Clone Federation and says the old ways of the Republic should be extinct and they must come up with a defense system of the Republic hinting at a Republic Army. After this big Senate scene, Anakin is alone and Palpatine finds him. Anakin apologizes that he can't look after him anymore, and Palpatine makes a joke that he hates the new Jedi that is assigned to him. However, the conversation is interupted as Razaak enters Corcusant. However, there is no attack on him due to his announcement that they have a Jedi hostage, Obi Wan hologram is shown. Anakin is shocked. Razaak enters the Senate and faces Chancellor Augustine. His demands - he should be reinstated in the Republic and demands a system to be turned over to him. If his demands are not met, the Jedi dies and there will be an invasion of his Clone Soldiers into Corcusant to take over the Republic. He leaves. The Republic goes into frantic mode. Chaos.
Anakin meditiates. He uses his fear and anger to sense where Obi Wan is at. He goes to Rose's apartment to tell her that he has to leave and he knows where Obi Wan is at. He came to say goodbye. She cries, they kiss. Anakin returns to Mustaphar headquarters to borrow a ship. Palpatine considers him a friend and lends him a ship. Rose returns and begs Anakin not to go that he can not head into the Clone homebase by himself and survive. Anakin tells her that its his friendship with Obi Wan that is his decision in going and he has no choice. He says he loves her. Kwan, Rose and Palpatine watch Anakin head off toward the Kamino. Palpatine tracks the ship.
Anakin lands and sneaks through the base. Lots of action sequences. On Corcusant, Augustine and the top Republic Officials are in panic mode. Palpatine enters and tells Augustine that its time to sign the act of war and enable a Republic Army. Palpatine offers his Mustaphar Army. Palpatine says he knows where the Clones are located.
Anakin meets with Obi Wan. Obi Wan is freed by him, but injured. Anakin has brought a lightsaber for him. Anakin says he needs to get him out, he hears the footsteps approach. It is Pryor. Pryor ignites his red lightsaber. Obi Wan tells Anakin to get out. Anakin tells Obi Wan that he can take him. He is more powerful. Obi Wan at this point realizes he needs to let go of Anakin. Anakin isn't teen anymore, he's an adult. A full Jedi Knight. The two battle Pryor with lightsabers, the room is super dark, near black, but the dark blue rain clouds are seen through a giant window. Anakin yells at Obi Wan to get to his ship, that Anakin will take Pryor. Obi Wan finally lets go, and listens to his student. He leaves - and its Anakin versus Pryor. The two clash. Pryor then begins to feel his emotions. He sees through Anakin. Anakin's confusion. His struggles. He senses he is in love. With a woman. The window is blown and the two fall down the roof in the rain outside. The two manage to jump through an opening which leads to a power generator type of room. Pryor ups the stakes. He then gives Anakin a choice. To leave now or else he will kill Anakin, and then locate his love and kill her too. Now the stakes are higher than ever, if Anakin loses, he will lose Rose. This only brings out so much anger and emotion out of Anakin, that suddenly he battles like he's never battled anyone before, with pure hatred, pure fear, pure anger. In an homage to the film 'Last of the Mohicans', Anakin decapitiates Pryor. He senses Obi Wan's ship. He gets aboard, but doesn't escape. He flies an opposite direcetion, which confuses Obi Wan. Anakin says he is going to end this Clone War. The Clone Ships launch off to prepare to surround Corcusant, but Mustaphar Ships have arrived, with an all out space climatic battle. The Jedi are on board one of the commanding ships. Baz and his Jedi look on.
Obi Wan and Anakin get to Razaak. Anakin holds his lightsaber up to Razaak's throat. Razaak laughs and says that there is a Sith Lord that will kill him. Anakin ignites Pryor's red lightsaber showing him that he already defeated the Sith Lord. The Republic Army defeats most of the Clone Ships. Razaak is defeated and captured.
Celebration in Corcusant. Lots of people , reporters surround Anakin as he is the hero of the Clone War. One reporter asks who he endorses for the new Chancellor, Anakin responds 'Palpatine'. A final scene between Baz Newton and Anakin. Baz says he can be a Jedi again, Anakin responds he never stopped being a Jedi. Anakin leaves. Palpatine is in his quarters. As he seems to be a real candidate in this election, the final Clone Assassin approaches with caution. He enters the room of Palpatine who is alone. Palpatine staring out the window closes his eyes. He says 'you have failed me'. This is the reveal that Palpatine was indeed the one that was behind the assassination of Bail Organa. He then uses the dark side to force choke and murder the last Clone Assassin.
Final Scene - Alderaan. A Giant Wedding. Anakin & Rose. Obi Wan looks on with Baz. Dialogue between the two. Baz says even though he is highly against this, Anakin is the hero of the Clone War. Obi Wan smiles and chuckles. Obi Wan takes his place as the best man. Chancellor Augustine arrives. Bail Organa and his crew arrange seats nearby, but instead, Augustine walks past Bail Organa and finds a seat near front next to Palpatine and the Mustaphar group - signifying that Palpatine will most likely now win the election and become the new Chancellor. Anakin and Rose wed and the two kiss.
THE END
AFTER THOUGHTS
The central and main character is Anakin Skywalker and his development as a character. I took the characters of the first story and expanded them. This story centers around the complete character and inner struggle of Anakin. He is no longer some petty thief. He is now a full Jedi Knight and trying to do the right thing. But his whole motivation of becoming a Jedi was because of Rose Winterfield. The story is about the relationship between Anakin and Rose, Palpatine, Obi Wan, Kwan, & Jedi Order - Baz Newton. His love for Rose, his friendship of Obi Wan, his conflict with the Jedi and finally his new unusual friendship with Palpatine. When I wrote out this Prequel Trilogy, I had a clear idea of what Episode I should be (Seven Samurai homage) and I had a clear vision of how to end the trilogy with Episode III (With the downfall of a hero and rise of the Emperor). But Episode II , the middle part, was always the hardest to write, so I ended up concentrating on this story the most. And to my surprise, this is my best work. The story flows well. And I got a hell of a lot of compliments on the relationship between Anakin and Palpatine. One reader gave me feedback that it reminded him of a twisted version of Luke and Yoda from Empire Strikes Back. While I did not do that intentionally, I took that as a big compliment. I really felt in Episode I - Anakin should fail. Then in Episode II - Anakin should succeed and become the hero of the Clone War. Even in the start, it was important to show Anakin as a Jedi, showing he's trained, but having him stumble a little, showing that he is not all powerful just yet - that his anger, and emotions lead him to become super powerful at the end of the film. Its interesting, with The Seven Jedi, I discuss all the different characters because its this introduction adventure story. With this one, its all about Anakin Skywalker and his struggles. His infautation and romance with Rose leads him to conflict with Baz Newton. Baz Newton is now the leader of the Jedi. A once lone wolf, rebellious, now he has to take the reigns of become a leader.
If anyone has read my main website, I mention that Lucas created Star Wars using elements of inspriational films and tv shows such as Kurosawa's Hidden Fortress & Flash Gordan serials on tv. When researching how to write the Prequels, I want to follow that same pattern. So I obviously used Kurosawa's more famous film The Seven Samurai as my template for Episode I. With Episode II, I used Titanic, which is a classic love story as well as Escape from New York. The whole Obi Wan on Dantooine rescuing Chancellor Augustine is a clear homage (or rip off if you think it sucks) to John Carpenter's Escape from New York. The Obi Wan adventure really displays the action and adventure of the story because the Anakin on Corcusant is all romance and drama. Except the part where Anakin battles the three Clone Assassin in the Alderaan building. But Obi Wan facing the Sabretooth Tiger was an homage to the 10,000 BC film, which wasn't too memorable, but the Tiger scene was interesting. I'm a fan of movies first and foremost, I just feel Star Wars just happens to be my favorite of them all. I actually would probably get schooled by 90% of true Star Wars fans in trivia. I don't know every droid's name. But one thing I do know is film history, character development & psychology - which hopefully separates myself from the hundreds of other Prequel Rewrites.
Hope you guys enjoyed the summary of Episode II - A Forbidden Love. I will continue and post Episode III soon. And then I get to really dive into this sequel trilogy because I just lost hope in Disney's Star Wars.
The central and main character is Anakin Skywalker and his development as a character. I took the characters of the first story and expanded them. This story centers around the complete character and inner struggle of Anakin. He is no longer some petty thief. He is now a full Jedi Knight and trying to do the right thing. But his whole motivation of becoming a Jedi was because of Rose Winterfield. The story is about the relationship between Anakin and Rose, Palpatine, Obi Wan, Kwan, & Jedi Order - Baz Newton. His love for Rose, his friendship of Obi Wan, his conflict with the Jedi and finally his new unusual friendship with Palpatine. When I wrote out this Prequel Trilogy, I had a clear idea of what Episode I should be (Seven Samurai homage) and I had a clear vision of how to end the trilogy with Episode III (With the downfall of a hero and rise of the Emperor). But Episode II , the middle part, was always the hardest to write, so I ended up concentrating on this story the most. And to my surprise, this is my best work. The story flows well. And I got a hell of a lot of compliments on the relationship between Anakin and Palpatine. One reader gave me feedback that it reminded him of a twisted version of Luke and Yoda from Empire Strikes Back. While I did not do that intentionally, I took that as a big compliment. I really felt in Episode I - Anakin should fail. Then in Episode II - Anakin should succeed and become the hero of the Clone War. Even in the start, it was important to show Anakin as a Jedi, showing he's trained, but having him stumble a little, showing that he is not all powerful just yet - that his anger, and emotions lead him to become super powerful at the end of the film. Its interesting, with The Seven Jedi, I discuss all the different characters because its this introduction adventure story. With this one, its all about Anakin Skywalker and his struggles. His infautation and romance with Rose leads him to conflict with Baz Newton. Baz Newton is now the leader of the Jedi. A once lone wolf, rebellious, now he has to take the reigns of become a leader.
If anyone has read my main website, I mention that Lucas created Star Wars using elements of inspriational films and tv shows such as Kurosawa's Hidden Fortress & Flash Gordan serials on tv. When researching how to write the Prequels, I want to follow that same pattern. So I obviously used Kurosawa's more famous film The Seven Samurai as my template for Episode I. With Episode II, I used Titanic, which is a classic love story as well as Escape from New York. The whole Obi Wan on Dantooine rescuing Chancellor Augustine is a clear homage (or rip off if you think it sucks) to John Carpenter's Escape from New York. The Obi Wan adventure really displays the action and adventure of the story because the Anakin on Corcusant is all romance and drama. Except the part where Anakin battles the three Clone Assassin in the Alderaan building. But Obi Wan facing the Sabretooth Tiger was an homage to the 10,000 BC film, which wasn't too memorable, but the Tiger scene was interesting. I'm a fan of movies first and foremost, I just feel Star Wars just happens to be my favorite of them all. I actually would probably get schooled by 90% of true Star Wars fans in trivia. I don't know every droid's name. But one thing I do know is film history, character development & psychology - which hopefully separates myself from the hundreds of other Prequel Rewrites.
Hope you guys enjoyed the summary of Episode II - A Forbidden Love. I will continue and post Episode III soon. And then I get to really dive into this sequel trilogy because I just lost hope in Disney's Star Wars.